U need to slow down the pace abit in the beginning, the toilet scene, not alot just like one or two second thing for andy to insert his voice over intro, no worries we can do it during editing. THis is important cuz we need to have pacing throughout the film. the scenes that shd be slow are the HDB jump floor scene. Dun worries it should be 4 min + top most.

U can start with watever style of editing u want on the current shoots we have now but re to save the entire good takes in entirety so that we can use them again. I like the car one, not bad. Furthermore where is the scene where ANdy bought a new car AND drives off? the first part have but the driving off? we just put everything in and then start cutting here and there.